So yeah, seriously, I've been pretty joky in my comments on these chapters so far, but I want to get serious for a minute, because this is probably the darkest book that I've written so far. It still isn't too dark. You get a sense early on that the good guys are all gonna be okay. However, I tried to do the reveal of the evil being Blackheart justice by making him disturbingly evil, and calmly so, like saying the things that he says is nothing to him, just part of who he is. What really made me want to take the comment on this chapter seriously, though, is the presence of Christopher Johnson in it. Unlike most rivals to the main character in Yu-Gi-Oh!, Christopher only shows up a few times in my books. In fact, this is only his second appearance, his third if you count the first Special. And Blackheart basically intends to eat him.
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